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On the whole, this is a good summary of psychological research into dreams. There are two major elements that are missing from this paper.
- A clear thesis. Instead of simply summarizing the various theories on dreams, choose one and analyze it thoroughly. For example, what exactly is wrong with Freud's theory? Where exactly do Freud and Jung disagree? Likewise, compare and contrast Allan Hobson and Robert McCarley claim that dreams are meaningless with that of Antti Revonsuo. There are multiple directions you can go in here.
- Your paper needs to be formatted properly (MLA, APA, or Chicago). You provide a list of references at the end of your paper, but there is no indication that these references are actually used in the paper itself. You need to display some sort of in text citation.