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- gene mutations
This checkpoint is being reviewed by Jasmine
📚 Content Feedback:
- Your writing has the makings of a well-structured essay, I noticed how you included an introduction, topic sentences, transitions and a conclusion!
- I am curious what your personal opinion on cloning is.
- You could make this clear to your audience through a thesis statement
- Not sure if I completely understand how cloning affects mentality, can you explain this more?
- I saw that you reached out to your peers to review your project, could you have a family member review it if your peers are too busy?
- Are there any sci-fi novels or tv shows that you can connect to your ideas you presented in your essay?
- What sources did you use, if any?
☑️ Action Items:
- Check out Concise Writing and Informative Writing async level ups in Canvas
- Make sure to take the time to reflect on your project
- I'd like to understand your thought process, could you explain your justification for leveling up on your skills?
- Provide further explanation and sources on your claim “the process wasn't like they expected, can drastically change the mentality”
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